One on the reader wrote:
Read the story mau.
as i started moving from one chapter to another, i knew that i will not be able to leave my pc untill i finish reading. but something very urgent came up n i had to take a break. well i m bk home n first thing i did was to switch on my pc. n here i m with a lump in my throat. n watery eyes.
a story with so much feeling - straight from the heart n so true in the life of so many youngsters( me included). its really sad that we keep worrying abt failure n thus not open the topic with our sweetheart. we never realise that by not making an attempt we have already failed.
well a m sure that u must have got great reviews by now - from all quarters- n that will encourage/ motivate u to move ahead with your newly acquired passion. so all the best. to tell u the truth, i m already very eager to read another book of yours. hope u will not keep us waiting for long.
to be a bit critical abt your writing ( this i must add being a genuine well wisher of yours). quite a few grammar errors. at times, time sequencing was faulty n a few characters have appeared suddenly without a proper introduction. lastly its difficult to accept that a top notch management student - very comfortable with laptop n other electronic gadgets - excellent in presentations - is not aware of control s.
but well, this was your first try (i think so) - all the future efforts of yours will be faultless - i m too sure about that.
tc mau. n keep smiling always - u look very cute that way. bye for now.
yr lost friend
(A loving friend of mine, always encouraging me for all my efforts! Sir ! I am honoured by your comments!)
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